On 11/04/17 15:51, Jes Sorensen wrote: >> >> .TP >> .B \-\-readonly >> -This will mark an active array as read-only, providing that it is >> -not currently being used. >> +This will set an active array as read-only status. > > I think this chance is not good, and should be omitted. Agreed, except that I would change "providing" to "provided". > >> .TP >> .B \-\-readwrite >> -This will change a >> +This will change an >> .B readonly >> array back to being read/write. > > This change is grammatically incorrect I believe and the original text > is correct. Agreed. Cheers, Wol -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-raid" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
