Hello Jim Snarski, Yes, There is another Jim. My post speaks about Jim Thyer's image. Pini -----Original Message----- From: PhotoForum [mailto:photoforum-bounces@xxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Cap'n Jimmy Sent: Sunday, November 8, 2020 6:42 PM To: PhotoForum educational network Subject: Re: Old and New Hello Pini, you have the wrong Jim...my photo is of the zookeeper feeding the little bird... >Hi Jim, >This is mainly a texture & composition based image. >I like this type of photos. >This time I feel that it was not done the best as possible. >Some points to be noticed: The right side shadow would be better >continue to the lower corner of the frame. >The upper shadowed creek (upper right edge) would be better IMO not >cropped and make half frame together with the right side shadow. >The shadow of the lower old bolt is cropped. >Try to rotate the image about 2 degrees counterclockwise. >If for doing all of the above you have to widen your zoom and >include more of the wood in the left side of the image, this is also >good in my opinion. >The texture can also benefit from little adjustments of clarity and levels. >Hope this help and no offensive. > >Pini >
