On 9/20/14, 5:52 AM, Andrew Davidhazy wrote: > The PhotoForum members' gallery/exhibit space was updated Sept. 20, 2014. Authors with work now on display at: http://people.rit.edu/andpph/gallery.html include: > > Herschel Mair - Linda Davis with horses An excellent portrait. The movement of the back horse adds some humor. The sky is a little bright, as is the back horse's head, and I think I like this better with a crop just to the left of the left horse's ear (but not right to the edge, let the image breathe a bit). *Really* a good portrait. > Emily Ferguson - At the mouth of the Hoh Well, it's about the cloud's relationship to the trees, and I'd like to see more definition in the clouds. More contrast would help, I think. > John Retallack - Durand beach why we love the water The panorama crop doesn't really work for me; the boat is a surprise and I like it, but I think I'd crop to the right of the boat (the clouds on the left are more defined). > Klaus Knuth - Sunset At The Farm. It's a sunset. Its very pretty, but I've seen a lot of sunsets. More interest in the foreground would help. > Jan Faul - Incoming Tide, Vesterhavet Poorly exposed and no interest except perhaps for the vertical shaft of light, unfortunately in the center. The horizon is crooked. > Dan Mitchell - Waiting A nice photograph somewhat spoiled by over processing. It might be better to eschew the HDR and go B&W. > Bob McCulloch - Connor A cute picture, but unfortunately, the subject is not in focus. It's an engaging picture; it would be more so if it was in focus. > Christopher Strevens - Outside the death house A depressing picture. Certainly an apt title, however much veracity there may be in it.
