Re: 12 PF members exhibit on April 19, 2014

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Hi Yoram,

Thanks for reviewing,  What do you mean by "Hmmm"? 

I want to learn something from every critique.

(I can survive also a bad one.)

Pini

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On 24 באפר 2014, at 04:12, YGelmanPhoto <ygelmanphoto@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Some nice shots this week -- and I like the larger number of shots too.  

The PhotoForum members' gallery/exhibit space was updated April 19, 2014:

 

http://people.rit.edu/andpph/gallery.html include:

                        Tina Manley - Making Rice Paper

Very interesting, all around.  Backlit paper, woman's concentration.  I'd like to know what those things are behind the woman -- part of the paper process?  The copyright is very distracting.

 

                        Rob Talbot - Julie

Can't figure this one.  Dentist's chair, airplane seat?

 

                        John Retallack -

I think this should be worked further -- at least to increase depth.  Could be nice.

 

                        Pablo Coronel - Dogwood blossom

I don't know about van Gogh, but the falling branch and the back lighting is nice and that insect/bird on the right adds the right touch.  (Hummingbird moth?)

 

                        Allan Rosen-Ducat - Happening in the desert

Interesting sculpture.  Can't say much more

 

                        Jim Snarski - Liftoff

Nice to see.  One shot of many? -- or just a lucky shot?  

 

                        Bob McCulloch - Morning Skies

Interesting shot in an otherwise ho-hum genre.  

 

                        Art Faul - Oban Harbor and Mull Ferry

Very interesting, but after looking at it for a while I began to sense something might be wrong.  Is the ferry really that large? -- the perspective does not seem right.  Or something.  Still interesting, however.

 

                        Yoram Gelman - Bobbin Rack

 

                        Dan Mitchell - Ghost Passage

This could become a good dramatic shot.  Especially if there is more to choose from at the other end of the passage.  (Or stick in something else ;-) )

 

                        Pini Vollach - Ant looking up

Hmmm.

  

                        Andrew Davidhazy - Molly on the run!

A great shot, reminiscent of one part the Muybridge panel proving that a galloping horse sometimes has all four feet in the air.  Like the "Liftoff" shot above, was it one shot of many? -- or just a lucky shot?  

 

'Till next time,  -yoram