Emily,
Thank you for your review.
What did you mean by saying: " I would not have made them that way."
Pini
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Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2012 8:18 PM
To: List for Photo/Imaging Educators - Professionals - Students
Subject: Re: New photographs in PF members gallery Nov 03, 2012
At 2:34 PM -0400 11/3/12, Andrew Davidhazy wrote:
The PhotoForum members' gallery/exhibit space was updated Nov 3, 2012.
Authors with work now on display at:
http://people.rit.edu/andpph/gallery.html include:
Emily Ferguson - shadow on clapboard
It seems surely many of us have been a little preoccupied this week...
Randy Little - Hair 1 Tomoko
flat. I don't know whether that matters.
John Palcewski - Solitude
Too much other stuff stealing attention from the cigar smoke.
Jim Thyer - Canberra Arrives
The balance, graphically, between the red sweater and the red barge
contradicts the feeling that the barge is going somewhere, as well as that
the hull on the barge is the subject of the photograph. More space in front
of the barge and a lot less of the photographer might repair that without
completely eliminating the color echo.
Laurenz Bobke - Carrot Face
great lewd angle! The color is a bit intense - pushes the subject into the
realm of the unreal.
Pini Vollach -
Interesting choices here - placement of the cascade, of the pussy willow
bud, of the immature other pussy willow stem. I would not have made them
that way.
Robert Hall - Cloisters
Just a tiny bit squashed at the top for my taste. The precedents for
this shot are nearly impossible to escape.
Michael Hughes - Air Force Museum exhibit from WW2
If there's a connection between the legend above the poster and the
poster itself, a square crop might have relieved the image of that
brown stuff on the R side. If there's no connection, a vertical of
the poster would have been sufficient content for a single image, to
me. Whatever, I would have cloned the brown stuff out.
In waiting: Faul, Strevens, McCulloch
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Emily L. Ferguson
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