Emily, Thank you for your review. What did you mean by saying: " I would not have made them that way." Pini -----Original Message----- From: owner-photoforum@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx [mailto:owner-photoforum@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx] On Behalf Of Emily L. Ferguson Sent: Thursday, November 08, 2012 8:18 PM To: List for Photo/Imaging Educators - Professionals - Students Subject: Re: New photographs in PF members gallery Nov 03, 2012 At 2:34 PM -0400 11/3/12, Andrew Davidhazy wrote: >The PhotoForum members' gallery/exhibit space was updated Nov 3, 2012. >Authors with work now on display at: >http://people.rit.edu/andpph/gallery.html include: > > > Emily Ferguson - shadow on clapboard It seems surely many of us have been a little preoccupied this week... > Randy Little - Hair 1 Tomoko flat. I don't know whether that matters. > John Palcewski - Solitude Too much other stuff stealing attention from the cigar smoke. > > Jim Thyer - Canberra Arrives The balance, graphically, between the red sweater and the red barge contradicts the feeling that the barge is going somewhere, as well as that the hull on the barge is the subject of the photograph. More space in front of the barge and a lot less of the photographer might repair that without completely eliminating the color echo. > Laurenz Bobke - Carrot Face great lewd angle! The color is a bit intense - pushes the subject into the realm of the unreal. > > Pini Vollach - Interesting choices here - placement of the cascade, of the pussy willow bud, of the immature other pussy willow stem. I would not have made them that way. > > Robert Hall - Cloisters Just a tiny bit squashed at the top for my taste. The precedents for this shot are nearly impossible to escape. > Michael Hughes - Air Force Museum exhibit from WW2 If there's a connection between the legend above the poster and the poster itself, a square crop might have relieved the image of that brown stuff on the R side. If there's no connection, a vertical of the poster would have been sufficient content for a single image, to me. Whatever, I would have cloned the brown stuff out. > >In waiting: Faul, Strevens, McCulloch > >To participate in this activity find instructions at: >http://people.rit.edu/andpph/gallery-sub.html submit. It's Thursday. -- Emily L. Ferguson mailto:elf@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 508-563-6822 New England landscapes, wooden boats and races http://www.landsedgephoto.com HOT OFF THE PRESS! SAILING SEPIA IMAGES VOL II: http://www.lulu.com/spotlight/elfpix Check out my Spring daily photograph project at: http://tinyurl.com/3a6m7g6 And Summer: http://tinyurl.com/22juo5s Autumn now complete here: http://tinyurl.com/26pdgz9 Winter concluded here: http://tinyurl.com/2co5wkg
