At 2:47 PM -0500 11/8/08, ADavidhazy wrote:
The PhotoForum members' gallery/exhibit space was updated NOV 08,
2008. Authors
with work now on display at:
http://people.rit.edu/andpph/gallery.html include:
Karl Shah-Jenner -
very nice choice of focal point, great how you sustained the detail
in her body against that brilliant yellow whatever-it-is (surely not
grass), but how does she know that she's going to actually contact
the ball when the bat is behind her head?!
Rob Miracle - Evil Eve
Wow, Rob. Is that ever ugly! Let me turn the page, quick! But not
evil. Her expression is too lacking in affect. Maybe raising the
apple and tilting her head downward a bit, so she's looking up at the
viewer? Or a slighly malicious smirk?
Trevor Cunningham - pickin' a knit
Nit. Knit is what I should be doing with my new winter hat. The
crop is great, but the lack of light on mom's muzzle is kind of a
shame. Could you just bring it up a bit in the converter? Or dodge
it a little. Looks like there's lots of detail there.
Dan Mitchell - Scarlet Woman
Fabulous rendition of the second worst part of western society. A
little softness in the chair seats would have focussed the viewer's
attention on the cosmetic set and maybe added to the impact.
Now go get something along that line about the fast food business!
Christopher Strevens - Worry
The spirit is really nice, Chris. I sort of wish the whole image
were sharper, not crunchy sharp but just not so soft. And not quite
such hot hair. But the spirit of the image is really very nice.
Rene M Hales - Locked In
Softening the edges of the jail. Interesting implication.
Michael Hughes - Halloween Hag in Norwich
Might have been better to throw the cars out of focus entirely. I
suppose the sticks of wood are for stoves? or heaters? They remind
me of my trip to Germany back in the early '90s where I saw "forests"
of spindly trees all planted in rows with not a speck of wildness
around them.
New show up Sat. Don't forget to send in a photo for it, now!
--
Emily L. Ferguson
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New England landscapes, wooden boats and races
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