Alan, There was some very good work in your portfolio, thanks for the look. A couple of comments would be, to much focus on people in the foreground with wide dynamic motion behind them. It's a great technique but somewhat overdone. Also, where was the pics of the feet? Too much looking up maybe? You picked the best part of the day/evening and that really enhanced the comps. These settings are great to test our photojournalism abilities by allowing us to produce a story. Looking for those strong opening, transitional and closing images. Take care, Gregory david Stempel FIREFRAMEi m a g i n g www.americanphotojournalist.com "The brave ones were shooting the enemy. The Crazy ones were shooting film."
