Re: PF members' exhibits 05-04-03

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Thanks, I'll just use this template provided:-)
Nothing this week really grabbed me, so no real inspiration for a
review, but I owe one, and a negative review I feel is better than a
glowing one undeserved, or perhaps no review.

>Marilyn Dalrymple: Chasing Shadows
Very contrasty artsy fartsy work. I'd have rotated a bit to put the
lower shadow to be cut in the bottom left corner.

>Elson T. Elizaga: Assassin
Great record bug photo. You should have tried some more natural
looking pose, this one's for the biology books.

>Rick Kessler: mmmm mmmm goood
To me, I'd have liked more bottom rather than too much sky up there.
It might also have removed that annoying curving of the horizon.

>King/Arthur: Shoe Repair
It's certainly some kind of jazzy thing, but overall has no lasting
impression. Keep trying.

>Rich Mason
Patriotic statement photo. Well shot, perhaps the best image this
week.

>Dan Mitchell: Mill
"... more than a picture postcard shot"
Well, it is that. And a black day in hell for the history of
photography no doubt - well it's not that bad. I just question, why a
black sky?

>Kostas Papakotas: is that Dog Life?
Interesting story there. You cropped top or bottom, why not crop some
off the left side? And bump up the midtones, it's a bit dreary
looking.

>Robin G. Ramos: Ascending
Well, this is more than a run of the mill photo. But, for me it
doesn't quite make it to greatness. The structure hitting the kid's
head is the worst thing for the photo, perhaps a lower angle would
have made this shot better.

>David Small
Nice image and composition, but the people just don't seem very clear.
I'd like to see this photo reworked to get some midtones. Yes, I know
it was a contrasty day.

>Christopher Strevens, LRPS: Busker at Kingston
I think this is a pretty decent Photoshop rendition. Also, the
composition and colouration is nice.

>Jayanth Vincent: Indian Dance
Well, you see one photo like this, you've seen them all I guess :-)
Seriously though, cool the colours, it's way too warm. Lighting and
composition look good. I like seeing these ladies full body, in a
pose.

That's it, hope this helps.

Jim Davis
Nature Photography
http://www.kjsl.com/~jbdavis/


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