> -----Original Message----- > From: Gregory david Stempel [mailto:fyrframe@centurytel.net] > > Greg Fraser: Rail Song > I see the point to this image, but it seems to tight. The > railings conflict > with he graffiti and the "neglect" is lost from my > perspective of too little > information, especially where the shopping carts are > concerned and lack of > foreground. Adding some garbage or greasy stains in the > foreground would > have been the coup de Gras (SP?) for me. Perhaps my comments about the image were too distracting. I wasn't really trying to portray urban neglect so I probably should have left the comments blank. Perhaps the image just doesn't work though. I'll have to stare at it some more. Thanks for the comments. Greg
