Deen, Suggestions on how one may modify an image is not criticism, but ideas. Like a bunch of us having a beer at a local pub, bantering over the ideas of what makes a good image, what makes memorable art. Galen Rowell took a philosophical viewpoint. Elliot Porter, a iconoclastic point of view and John Shaw's point was for technical accuracy both in exposure control and composition. All three would provide the gallery with different assessments of just about anything discussed. I have never be attracted to model, advertising or wedding photography but do feel it's important to suggest as a gallery review comment on what I would find most interesting in viewing that type of imaging. How does one critique a news image if they spend their time photographing nudes or studio product shooting? Take care, Gregory david Stempel FIREFRAMEi m a g i n g
