Re: [PATCH-perfbook] fix a typo in QQ 10.15

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Thank Paul for reviewing and wordsmithing the fix for me.

As usually, I read the new version many times,and my English
proficiency obtained enhancement ;-)

Thanks again
Zhouyi

On Wed, Aug 25, 2021 at 12:46 AM Paul E. McKenney <paulmck@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>
> On Tue, Aug 24, 2021 at 05:16:47PM +0800, Zhouyi Zhou wrote:
> > Signed-off-by: Zhouyi Zhou <zhouzhouyi@xxxxxxxxx>
> > ---
> > Hi Paul,
> >
> > When I examine the answer to QQ 10.15, I can't find the word "roughly"
> > around, so I guess it should be "rough" instead ;-)
> >
> > Thanks
> > Zhouyi
>
> Right you are, and thank you!  I have queued and pushed your patch with
> the usual wordsmithing, so please take a look below.
>
>                                                         Thanx, Paul
>
> ------------------------------------------------------------------------
>
> commit 6adb3af174ee4ccacd2d6e83025a06bf50f9aee0
> Author: Zhouyi Zhou <zhouzhouyi@xxxxxxxxx>
> Date:   Tue Aug 24 17:16:47 2021 +0800
>
>     datastruct: Fix a typo in QQ 10.15: s/roughly/rough/
>
>     There is no prior "roughly" for alert readers to have noted, so this
>     commit changes to that "roughly" to "rough", of which there are prior
>     instances.
>
>     Signed-off-by: Zhouyi Zhou <zhouzhouyi@xxxxxxxxx>
>     Signed-off-by: Paul E. McKenney <paulmck@xxxxxxxxxx>
>
> diff --git a/datastruct/datastruct.tex b/datastruct/datastruct.tex
> index c3700332..552bd955 100644
> --- a/datastruct/datastruct.tex
> +++ b/datastruct/datastruct.tex
> @@ -1696,7 +1696,7 @@ bottleneck.
>         the bottleneck and the larger number of buckets increases this
>         workload's memory footprint.
>
> -       The alert reader will have noted the word ``roughly'' above
> +       The alert reader will have noted the word ``rough'' above
>         and might be interested in a more detailed analysis.
>         Such readers are invited to run similar benchmarks, using
>         whatever performance counters or hardware-analysis tools




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