Hi Paul,
Here are colon related tweaks though Chapter 9.
Patches 1/6 -- 3/6 don't change sentences/clauses/phrases except
for capitalization.
Patches 4/6 -- 6/6 remove redundant looking Oxford commas in
two-item enumeration lists.
However, I'm not sure Patches 4/6 -- 6/6 are the right fixes or not.
Please pick whichever ones you'd like.
NOTE: There is a hunk in Patch 3/6:
> @@ -535,9 +537,10 @@ and with increasing use of hazard pointers in other projects, demonstrates
> that tolerance for such inconsistencies is more common than one might
> imagine.
> This is especially the case given that single-item lookups are much more
> -common than traversals: After all, (1)~concurrent updates are less likely
> -to affect a single-item lookup than they are a full traversal, and
> -(2)~an isolated single-item lookup cannot detect such inconsistencies.
> +common than traversals:
> +After all, (1)~concurrent updates are less likely to affect a single-item
> +lookup than they are a full traversal, and (2)~an isolated single-item
> +lookup cannot detect such inconsistencies.
>
> From a more theoretical viewpoint, there are even some special cases where
> RCU readers can be considered to be fully ordered with updaters, despite
, where the inline enumerated list is not converted to the "enumerate*" list.
This one is lead by "After all," not by a colon, and I kept the lowercase
words following (1) and (2).
This level of fluctuation is unavoidable in natural language text,
I suppose.
Thanks, Akira
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Akira Yokosawa (6):
toolsoftrade, count, SMPdesign: Break and capitalize after colon
locking: Break and capitalize after colon
defer: Break and capitalize after colon
count: Remove Oxford comma in two-item enumeration list
locking: Remove Oxford comma in two-item list
defer: Remove Oxford comma in two-item list
SMPdesign/SMPdesign.tex | 23 ++++----
SMPdesign/beyond.tex | 19 +++----
count/count.tex | 66 ++++++++++++-----------
defer/hazptr.tex | 9 ++--
defer/rcufundamental.tex | 29 ++++++-----
defer/rcuintro.tex | 6 ++-
defer/rcuusage.tex | 34 +++++++-----
defer/seqlock.tex | 12 +++--
defer/whichtochoose.tex | 19 ++++---
locking/locking-existence.tex | 4 +-
locking/locking.tex | 98 ++++++++++++++++++++---------------
toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex | 31 ++++++-----
12 files changed, 201 insertions(+), 149 deletions(-)
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2.17.1
