[PATCH v2 -perfbook] howto, intro, cpu: Break and capitalize after colon

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Fix violations detected by the check scripts at hand.

Signed-off-by: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@xxxxxxxxx>
---
 cpu/cpu.tex         |  5 +++--
 cpu/hwfreelunch.tex | 18 +++++++++++-------
 cpu/overheads.tex   |  8 +++++---
 cpu/overview.tex    |  8 +++++---
 cpu/swdesign.tex    |  2 +-
 howto/howto.tex     | 23 ++++++++++++++---------
 intro/intro.tex     | 30 +++++++++++++++---------------
 7 files changed, 54 insertions(+), 40 deletions(-)

diff --git a/cpu/cpu.tex b/cpu/cpu.tex
index 183feb8c..8a4afc69 100644
--- a/cpu/cpu.tex
+++ b/cpu/cpu.tex
@@ -54,8 +54,9 @@ So, to sum up:
 \begin{enumerate}
 \item	The good news is that multicore systems are inexpensive and
 	readily available.
-\item	More good news:  The overhead of many synchronization operations
-	is much lower than it was on parallel systems from the early 2000s.
+\item	More good news:
+	The overhead of many synchronization operations is much lower
+	than it was on parallel systems from the early 2000s.
 \item	The bad news is that the overhead of cache misses is still high,
 	especially on large systems.
 \end{enumerate}
diff --git a/cpu/hwfreelunch.tex b/cpu/hwfreelunch.tex
index 92f04f16..68c6dd5f 100644
--- a/cpu/hwfreelunch.tex
+++ b/cpu/hwfreelunch.tex
@@ -167,8 +167,9 @@ That said, they may be necessary steps on the path to the late Jim Gray's
 \label{sec:cpu:Novel Materials and Processes}
 
 Stephen Hawking is said to have claimed that semiconductor manufacturers
-have but two fundamental problems: (1) the finite speed of light and
-(2) the atomic nature of matter~\cite{BryanGardiner2007}.
+have but two fundamental problems:
+(1)~The finite speed of light and
+(2)~the atomic nature of matter~\cite{BryanGardiner2007}.
 It is possible that semiconductor manufacturers are approaching these
 limits, but there are nevertheless a few avenues of research and
 development focused on working around these fundamental limits.
@@ -228,8 +229,9 @@ general-purpose CPU will normally use a loop (possibly unrolled)
 with a loop counter.
 Decoding the instructions, incrementing the loop counter, testing this
 counter, and branching back to the
-top of the loop are in some sense wasted effort: the real goal is
-instead to multiply corresponding elements of the two vectors.
+top of the loop are in some sense wasted effort:
+The real goal is instead to multiply corresponding elements of the
+two vectors.
 Therefore, a specialized piece of hardware designed specifically to
 multiply vectors could get the job done more quickly and with less
 energy consumed.
@@ -263,10 +265,12 @@ These hardware accelerators are often used for media decoding,
 so much so that a high-end MP3 player might be able to play audio
 for several minutes---with its CPU fully powered off the entire time.
 The purpose of these accelerators is to improve energy efficiency
-and thus extend battery life: special purpose hardware can often
-compute more efficiently than can a general-purpose CPU\@.
+and thus extend battery life:
+Special purpose hardware can often compute more efficiently than
+can a general-purpose CPU\@.
 This is another example of the principle called out in
-\cref{sec:intro:Generality}: \IX{Generality} is almost never free.
+\cref{sec:intro:Generality}:
+\IX{Generality} is almost never free.
 
 Nevertheless, given the end of \IXaltr{Moore's-Law}{Moore's Law}-induced
 single-threaded performance increases, it seems safe to assume that
diff --git a/cpu/overheads.tex b/cpu/overheads.tex
index 80d60d9d..4aeae6cd 100644
--- a/cpu/overheads.tex
+++ b/cpu/overheads.tex
@@ -500,8 +500,9 @@ cycles, as shown in the ``Global Comms'' row.
 	use several rolls (or multiple cases) of toilet paper to represent
 	the communications latency.
 
-	Important safety tip: make sure to account for the needs of
-	those you live with when appropriating toilet paper, especially
+	Important safety tip:
+	Make sure to account for the needs of those you live with when
+	appropriating toilet paper, especially
 	in 2020 or during a similar time when store shelves are free of
 	toilet paper and much else besides.
 
@@ -584,7 +585,8 @@ exceedingly efficiently, and is the subject of
 \begin{figure}
 \centering
 \resizebox{3in}{!}{\includegraphics{cartoons/Data-chasing-light-wave}}
-\caption{Hardware and Software: On Same Side}
+\caption{Hardware and Software:
+				On Same Side}
 \ContributedBy{Figure}{fig:cpu:Hardware and Software: On Same Side}{Melissa Broussard}
 \end{figure}
 
diff --git a/cpu/overview.tex b/cpu/overview.tex
index d1d23b36..33918e49 100644
--- a/cpu/overview.tex
+++ b/cpu/overview.tex
@@ -5,8 +5,9 @@
 \section{Overview}
 \label{sec:cpu:Overview}
 %
-\epigraph{Mechanical Sympathy: Hardware and software working together in
-	  harmony.}{\emph{Martin Thompson}}
+\epigraph{Mechanical Sympathy:
+	  Hardware and software working together in harmony.}
+	 {\emph{Martin Thompson}}
 
 Careless reading of computer-system specification sheets might lead one
 to believe that CPU performance is a footrace on a clear track, as
@@ -335,7 +336,8 @@ as illustrated by
 \cref{fig:cpu:CPU Waits for I/O Completion}.
 
 This is one of the differences between shared-memory and distributed-system
-parallelism: shared-memory parallel programs must normally deal with no
+parallelism:
+Shared-memory parallel programs must normally deal with no
 obstacle worse than a cache miss, while a distributed parallel program
 will typically incur the larger network communication latencies.
 In both cases, the relevant latencies can be thought of as a cost of
diff --git a/cpu/swdesign.tex b/cpu/swdesign.tex
index 63b6222f..75541229 100644
--- a/cpu/swdesign.tex
+++ b/cpu/swdesign.tex
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ be extremely infrequent and to enable very large quantities of processing.
 }\QuickQuizEnd
 
 The lesson should be quite clear:
-parallel algorithms must be explicitly designed with these hardware
+Parallel algorithms must be explicitly designed with these hardware
 properties firmly in mind.
 One approach is to run nearly independent threads.
 The less frequently the threads communicate, whether by \IX{atomic} operations,
diff --git a/howto/howto.tex b/howto/howto.tex
index 0f0ba293..8bc9e8e5 100644
--- a/howto/howto.tex
+++ b/howto/howto.tex
@@ -46,11 +46,16 @@ that it has brought to us!
 \section{Roadmap}
 \label{sec:howto:Roadmap}
 %
-\epigraph{Cat: Where are you going? \\
-	  Alice: Which way should I go? \\
-	  Cat: That depends on where you are going. \\
-	  Alice: I don't know. \\
-	  Cat: Then it doesn't matter which way you go.}
+\epigraph{Cat:
+		Where are you going? \\
+	  Alice:
+		Which way should I go? \\
+	  Cat:
+		That depends on where you are going. \\
+	  Alice:
+		I don't know. \\
+	  Cat:
+		Then it doesn't matter which way you go.}
 	 {\emph{Lewis Carroll, Alice in Wonderland}}
 
 This book is a handbook of widely applicable and heavily
@@ -359,8 +364,8 @@ Fortunately, there are many alternatives available to you:
 	thorough and accessible introduction with a good set of
 	examples.
 \item	If you are interested in C++11, you might like
-	\ppl{Anthony}{Williams}'s ``C++ Concurrency in Action: Practical
-	Multithreading''~\cite{AnthonyWilliams2012,AnthonyWilliams2019}.
+	\ppl{Anthony}{Williams}'s ``C++ Concurrency in Action:
+	Practical Multithreading''~\cite{AnthonyWilliams2012,AnthonyWilliams2019}.
 \item	If you are interested in C++, but in a Windows environment,
 	you might try \ppl{Herb}{Sutter}'s ``Effective Concurrency''
 	series in
@@ -528,8 +533,8 @@ namely that you are certifying that:
 
 This is quite similar to the Developer's Certificate of Origin (DCO)
 1.1 used by the Linux kernel.
-You must use your real name:  I unfortunately cannot accept pseudonymous or
-anonymous contributions.
+You must use your real name:
+I unfortunately cannot accept pseudonymous or anonymous contributions.
 
 The language of this book is American English, however, the open-source
 nature of this book permits translations, and I personally encourage them.
diff --git a/intro/intro.tex b/intro/intro.tex
index 5f2690fc..b185a7f7 100644
--- a/intro/intro.tex
+++ b/intro/intro.tex
@@ -23,11 +23,11 @@ However, new technologies that are difficult to use at introduction
 invariably become easier over time.
 For example, the once-rare ability to drive a car is now
 commonplace in many countries.
-This dramatic change came about for two basic reasons: (1)~cars became
-cheaper and more readily available, so that more people had the
-opportunity to learn to drive, and (2)~cars became easier to operate
-due to automatic transmissions, automatic chokes, automatic starters,
-greatly improved reliability,
+This dramatic change came about for two basic reasons:
+(1)~Cars became cheaper and more readily available, so that
+more people had the opportunity to learn to drive,
+and (2)~Cars became easier to operate due to automatic transmissions,
+automatic chokes, automatic starters, greatly improved reliability,
 and a host of other technological improvements.
 
 The same is true for many other technologies, including computers.
@@ -155,8 +155,8 @@ as discussed in \cref{sec:cpu:Hardware Free Lunch?}.
 	how could a large number of open-source projects, ranging from Apache
 	to MySQL to the Linux kernel, have managed to master it?
 
-	A better question might be: ``Why is parallel programming {\em
-	perceived} to be so difficult?''
+	A better question might be:
+	``Why is parallel programming \emph{perceived} to be so difficult?''
 	To see the answer, let's go back to the year 1991.
 	Paul McKenney was walking across the parking lot to Sequent's
 	benchmarking center carrying six dual-80486 Sequent Symmetry CPU
@@ -311,8 +311,8 @@ Each of these goals is elaborated upon in the following sections.
 \label{sec:intro:Performance}
 
 Performance is the primary goal behind most parallel-programming effort.
-After all, if performance is not a concern, why not do yourself
-a favor:  Just write sequential code, and be happy?
+After all, if performance is not a concern, why not do yourself a favor:
+Just write sequential code, and be happy?
 It will very likely be easier
 and you will probably get done much more quickly.
 
@@ -657,8 +657,8 @@ configuration, or other setup.
 	Those who indulge in excessive generality will therefore fail to set
 	the productivity bar high enough to succeed near the top of the
 	software stack.
-	This fact of life even has its own acronym: YAGNI, or ``You
-	Ain't Gonna Need It.''
+	This fact of life even has its own acronym:
+	YAGNI, or ``You Ain't Gonna Need It.''
 }\QuickQuizEnd
 
 Unfortunately, a system that does the job required by user~1 is
@@ -928,7 +928,7 @@ each of which is covered in the following sections.
 \label{sec:intro:Work Partitioning}
 
 Work partitioning is absolutely required for parallel execution:
-if there is but one ``glob'' of work, then it can be executed by at
+If there is but one ``glob'' of work, then it can be executed by at
 most one CPU at a time, which is by definition sequential execution.
 However, partitioning the work requires great care.
 For example, uneven partitioning can result in sequential execution
@@ -939,9 +939,9 @@ available hardware and restore performance and scalabilty.
 Although partitioning can greatly improve performance and scalability,
 it can also increase complexity.
 For example, partitioning can complicate handling of global
-errors and events: A parallel
-program may need to carry out non-trivial synchronization in order
-to safely process such global events.
+errors and events:
+A parallel program may need to carry out non-trivial synchronization
+in order to safely process such global events.
 More generally, each partition requires some sort of communication:
 After all, if
 a given thread did not communicate at all, it would have no effect and
-- 
2.17.1





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