On Wed, May 19, 2021 at 02:21:54AM +0800, Zhouyi Zhou wrote:
> Thanks Paul for reviewing my incorrect proposal.
No problem! After all, if I were ever to have to write a document
in Chinese, I would need quite a bit of help. Like the help you are
currently providing by doing this translation. ;-)
> On Wed, May 19, 2021 at 1:35 AM Paul E. McKenney <paulmck@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> >
> > In this case, "add" as in "addition" as in arithmetic, similar to the
> > C-language "+=" operator. But...
> I see, my English is improved a lot by this case, thank you
> >
> > Would "add the value one to the global free-running rcu_gp_ctr variable"
> > work better for you?
> "add the value one to the global free-running rcu_gp_ctr variable" looks
> great to me.
Very good! How about as shown below?
Thanx, Paul
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commit 498ad5f93ea7a531bd79592b08c072ebd73bb188
Author: Paul E. McKenney <paulmck@xxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Tue May 18 11:34:25 2021 -0700
appendix/toyrcu: Wordsmith "add the value one to"
Reported-by: Zhouyi Zhou <zhouzhouyi@xxxxxxxxx>
Signed-off-by: Paul E. McKenney <paulmck@xxxxxxxxxx>
diff --git a/appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex b/appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex
index 9e5c01d5..39e43e30 100644
--- a/appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex
+++ b/appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex
@@ -976,7 +976,7 @@ The resulting \co{rcu_read_lock()} implementation is extremely
straightforward.
\begin{fcvref}[ln:defer:rcu:read_lock_unlock:lock]
\Clnref{gp1,gp2} simply
-add one to the global free-running \co{rcu_gp_ctr}
+add the value one to the global free-running \co{rcu_gp_ctr}
variable and stores the resulting odd-numbered value into the
\co{rcu_reader_gp} per-thread variable.
\Clnref{mb} executes a memory barrier to prevent the content of the
