Thanks Paul for your encouragement.
Your encouragement has always been my motivation to keep on studying.
Thanks again
Cheers
Zhouyi
On Tue, May 4, 2021 at 12:21 AM Paul E. McKenney <paulmck@xxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>
> On Mon, May 03, 2021 at 08:15:54PM +0800, Zhouyi Zhou wrote:
> > Hi Paul,
> >
> > I am going to revise Chinese Edition of Appendix with
> > Yang Lu's unreserved help.
> >
> > During the process of reading, I examined the definition of
> > rcu_gp_ongoing in CodeSamples/defer/rcu_nest.h
> > Would it better to describe rcu_gp_ongoing in the book as:
> > 'it checks the set of bits indicated by RCU_GP_CTR_NEST_MASK.' because
> > I think 'it checks the bit indicated by RCU_GP_CTR_BOTTOM_BIT'
> > is a little confusing.
>
> Good eyes, thank you very much!
>
> I just made "bit" be plural, so it now reads "the bits indicated by
> RCU_GP_CTR_NEST_MASK". Queued and pushed, and again, thank you!
>
> Thanx, Paul
>
> > Thanks alot
> > Zhouyi Zhou
> >
> > Signed-off-by: Zhouyi Zhou <zhouzhouyi@xxxxxxxxx>
> > ---
> > appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex | 2 +-
> > 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> >
> > diff --git a/appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex b/appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex
> > index 8fd2aef0..830e4478 100644
> > --- a/appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex
> > +++ b/appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex
> > @@ -1215,7 +1215,7 @@ adds \co{RCU_GP_CTR_BOTTOM_BIT} to the global \co{rcu_gp_ctr}
> > instead of adding the constant ``2'',
> > and the second is that the comparison on \clnref{ongoing}
> > has been abstracted out to a separate function,
> > -where it checks the bit indicated by \co{RCU_GP_CTR_BOTTOM_BIT}
> > +where it checks the set of bits indicated by \co{RCU_GP_CTR_NEST_MASK}
> > instead of unconditionally checking the low-order bit.
> > \end{fcvref}
> >
> > --
> > 2.25.1
> >
