On Sat, Mar 13, 2021 at 12:12:36AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: > On Thu, 11 Mar 2021 18:25:58 -0800, Paul E. McKenney wrote: > > On Fri, Mar 12, 2021 at 09:03:23AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: > >> Hi Paul, > >> > >> So this is a collection of minor updates/tweaks for Edition 2. > >> > >> Patch 1/9 adds an author field in a bibliography entry. > >> Patch 2/9 fixes font in a epigraph. > >> Patch 3/9 adjusts position of a sideways table with a typo fix. > >> > >> Patches 4/9 -- 7/9 tweak float positions and line breaks mostly for > >> 1c builds. They affect 2c build as well. If you find any undesirable > >> changes in 2c builds, please let me know. I'll give a closer look. > >> > >> Patch 8/9 removes adhoc tweaks which have become irrelevant. > >> Patch 9/9 restores a2ping in a recipe for ghostscript 9.53.x. > >> It turned out that a2ping can cope with the up-to-date ghostscript. > >> > >> Thanks, Akira > > > > I merged these in, thank you! > > > > Is a second-edition release date of this weekend reasonable, or should > > I hold off for another week to allow more review? > > Another week sounds reasonable. > I'm not saying I can review all of your recent updates in a week, > but most rough edges can be fixed. > I've already spotted a few issues in the brand new summary chapter. Thank you, and I will use the time to re-review my recent changes. (I read them out loud to myself.) > BTW, It was good to know why you started perfbook. > The year 2021 means quite a lot for you, I suppose. And I hadn't realized until I wrote it that this was that year. ;-) I could argue that there is a lot of concurrent and parallel programming happening, so it must be getting pretty routine. Others would likely complain about one remaining difficulty or another. Some things never change! Thanx, Paul > Thanks, Akira > > > > > Thanx, Paul > > > >> -- > >> The following changes since commit 736cfb826271d7e25b45859cf793d4c7749d024b: > >> > >> appendix/questions: Updates and wordsmithing (2021-03-09 17:24:47 -0800) > >> > >> are available in the Git repository at: > >> > >> https://github.com/akiyks/perfbook.git tags/for-paul-2021.03.12a > >> > >> for you to fetch changes up to c337d0756f8862f981eab9f67262d39371769dbe: > >> > >> Makefile: Restore a2ping for .tex originated .eps files (2021-03-12 08:27:17 +0900) > >> > >> ---------------------------------------------------------------- > >> Akira Yokosawa (9): > >> bib/syncrefs: Add author info to AndrewDBirrell1989Threads > >> defer/updates: Use \emph{} for author part in epigraph > >> defer/rcuapi: Fix position of 'RCU Wait-to-Finish APIs' table > >> Use nbsp for 1c builds > >> Use 'tbp' as option of floats > >> Add \FloatBarrier to avoid far-away floats > >> easy: Shrink and move 'Mandelbrot Set' figures > >> Remove '\noclub[1]' tweaks > >> Makefile: Restore a2ping for .tex originated .eps files > >> > >> Makefile | 4 +++- > >> advsync/rt.tex | 1 + > >> appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex | 8 ++++---- > >> bib/syncrefs.bib | 1 + > >> debugging/debugging.tex | 1 - > >> defer/rcuapi.tex | 4 ++-- > >> defer/rcufundamental.tex | 10 +++++----- > >> defer/updates.tex | 2 +- > >> easy/easy.tex | 18 +++++++++--------- > >> future/future.tex | 2 ++ > >> future/tm.tex | 8 ++++---- > >> intro/intro.tex | 6 +++--- > >> locking/locking.tex | 1 - > >> memorder/memorder.tex | 41 +++++++++++++++++++++-------------------- > >> perfbook-lt.tex | 3 ++- > >> toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex | 4 ++-- > >> 16 files changed, 60 insertions(+), 54 deletions(-)