On Thu, 11 Mar 2021 18:25:58 -0800, Paul E. McKenney wrote: > On Fri, Mar 12, 2021 at 09:03:23AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: >> Hi Paul, >> >> So this is a collection of minor updates/tweaks for Edition 2. >> >> Patch 1/9 adds an author field in a bibliography entry. >> Patch 2/9 fixes font in a epigraph. >> Patch 3/9 adjusts position of a sideways table with a typo fix. >> >> Patches 4/9 -- 7/9 tweak float positions and line breaks mostly for >> 1c builds. They affect 2c build as well. If you find any undesirable >> changes in 2c builds, please let me know. I'll give a closer look. >> >> Patch 8/9 removes adhoc tweaks which have become irrelevant. >> Patch 9/9 restores a2ping in a recipe for ghostscript 9.53.x. >> It turned out that a2ping can cope with the up-to-date ghostscript. >> >> Thanks, Akira > > I merged these in, thank you! > > Is a second-edition release date of this weekend reasonable, or should > I hold off for another week to allow more review? Another week sounds reasonable. I'm not saying I can review all of your recent updates in a week, but most rough edges can be fixed. I've already spotted a few issues in the brand new summary chapter. BTW, It was good to know why you started perfbook. The year 2021 means quite a lot for you, I suppose. Thanks, Akira > > Thanx, Paul > >> -- >> The following changes since commit 736cfb826271d7e25b45859cf793d4c7749d024b: >> >> appendix/questions: Updates and wordsmithing (2021-03-09 17:24:47 -0800) >> >> are available in the Git repository at: >> >> https://github.com/akiyks/perfbook.git tags/for-paul-2021.03.12a >> >> for you to fetch changes up to c337d0756f8862f981eab9f67262d39371769dbe: >> >> Makefile: Restore a2ping for .tex originated .eps files (2021-03-12 08:27:17 +0900) >> >> ---------------------------------------------------------------- >> Akira Yokosawa (9): >> bib/syncrefs: Add author info to AndrewDBirrell1989Threads >> defer/updates: Use \emph{} for author part in epigraph >> defer/rcuapi: Fix position of 'RCU Wait-to-Finish APIs' table >> Use nbsp for 1c builds >> Use 'tbp' as option of floats >> Add \FloatBarrier to avoid far-away floats >> easy: Shrink and move 'Mandelbrot Set' figures >> Remove '\noclub[1]' tweaks >> Makefile: Restore a2ping for .tex originated .eps files >> >> Makefile | 4 +++- >> advsync/rt.tex | 1 + >> appendix/toyrcu/toyrcu.tex | 8 ++++---- >> bib/syncrefs.bib | 1 + >> debugging/debugging.tex | 1 - >> defer/rcuapi.tex | 4 ++-- >> defer/rcufundamental.tex | 10 +++++----- >> defer/updates.tex | 2 +- >> easy/easy.tex | 18 +++++++++--------- >> future/future.tex | 2 ++ >> future/tm.tex | 8 ++++---- >> intro/intro.tex | 6 +++--- >> locking/locking.tex | 1 - >> memorder/memorder.tex | 41 +++++++++++++++++++++-------------------- >> perfbook-lt.tex | 3 ++- >> toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex | 4 ++-- >> 16 files changed, 60 insertions(+), 54 deletions(-)