On Wed, Jul 18, 2018 at 09:15:12PM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
> On 2018/07/17 09:15:31 -0700, Paul E. McKenney wrote:
> > On Wed, Jul 18, 2018 at 12:43:16AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
> >> On 2018/07/16 09:39:24 -0700, Paul E. McKenney wrote:
> >>> On Tue, Jul 17, 2018 at 12:42:57AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
> >>>> Hi Paul,
> >>>>
> >>>> See inline comments below for a few nits and suggestions.
> >>>
> >>> I fixed the perror() calls straightforwardly, thank you!
> >>> Queued and pushed with both your and Elad's Reported-by.
> >>>
> >>>> On 2018/07/14 16:33:13 -0700, Paul E. McKenney wrote:
> >>>>> On Sat, Jul 14, 2018 at 08:59:48AM -0400, Elad Lahav wrote:
> >>>
> >>> [ . . . ]
> >>>
> >>>> I see you have already updated most of the code samples under CodeSamples/,
> >>>> but let me suggest an alternative way not to increase line counts
> >>>> (or even to decrease line counts).
> >>>>
> >>>> "pthread_create(3)" man page gives you an example code.
> >>>>
> >>>> First, two helpers are defined as follows:
> >>>>
> >>>> #define handle_error_en(en, msg) \
> >>>> do { errno = en; perror(msg); exit(EXIT_FAILURE); } while (0)
> >>>>
> >>>> #define handle_error(msg) \
> >>>> do { perror(msg); exit(EXIT_FAILURE); } while (0)
> >>>>
> >>>> Then, one of the call sites looks as follows:
> >>>>
> >>>> s = pthread_create(&tinfo[tnum].thread_id, &attr,
> >>>> &thread_start, &tinfo[tnum]);
> >>>> if (s != 0)
> >>>> handle_error_en(s, "pthread_create");
> >>>>
> >>>> If we employ this pattern, one of the hunks in your patch will look like:
> >>>>
> >>>> - if (pthread_mutex_lock(pmlp) != 0) {
> >>>> - perror("lock_reader:pthread_mutex_lock");
> >>>> - exit(-1);
> >>>> - }
> >>>> + if ((en = pthread_mutex_lock(pmlp)) != 0)
> >>>> + handle_error_en(en, "lock_reader:pthread_mutex_lock");
> >>>>
> >>>> Thoughts?
> >>>>
> >>>> I think these error cases are not our main topic, and to hide the
> >>>> details inside helpers sounds reasonable.
> >>>
> >>> Does it make sense to pull the "if" into the handle_error_en() macro
> >>> as well, perhaps like this?
> >>>
> >>> #define handle_error_en(en, msg) \
> >>> do { if (!en) break; errno = en; perror(msg); exit(EXIT_FAILURE); } while (0)
> >>>
> >>> s = pthread_create(&tinfo[tnum].thread_id, &attr,
> >>> &thread_start, &tinfo[tnum]);
> >>> handle_error_en(s, "pthread_create");
> >>>
> >>
> >> This version of handle_error_en() can return.
> >> As per Elad's suggestion, if we want to make fatal_en() not to return,
> >> we can't pull the "if".
> >>
> >> It looks to me by keeping the "if" out of helper funcs, fatal-error
> >> conditions can be made more obvious.
> >>
> >> s = pthread_create(&tinfo[tnum].thread_id, &attr,
> >> &thread_start, &tinfo[tnum]);
> >> if (s != 0)
> >> fatal_en(s, "pthread_create");
> >>
> >> I prefer this approach.
> >
> > At this point, I believe that the right approach is for me to instead
> > make use of the existing api.h wrappers for the pthread_*() functions.
> > Smaller code and fewer places to change as opinions shift. I was
> > thinking in terms of instead moving to the pthread_*() functions, but
> > this discussion has clearly shown the folly of that approach. ;-)
> >
> > The exceptions are of course the exposition of the pthread_*()
> > functions in the toolsoftrade chapter.
>
> Sounds reasonable to me.
>
> >
> >>>> Also, wouldn't it be a good idea to employ auto-numbering scheme as
> >>>> mentioned in Section D.3.1.1 of Style Guide when updating code snippets?
> >>>> This update will involve a lot of renumbering of line numbers otherwise.
> >>>>
> >>>> If you feel OK with this approach, I can prepare a patch series
> >>>> on behalf of you. (Can take a little while, though.)
> >>>
> >>> This approach involves labeling lines that are referred to in the text?
> >>> If those labels could be introduced as comments in the original code,
> >>> that could be really nice!
> >>
> >> By using "fancyvrb" package instead of "verbatimbox", this is mostly
> >> possible. by "mostly possible", I mean label within comments can
> >> be made invisible in the output, but "/*", "*/", and "//" will remain
> >> in the output.
> >>
> >> For example, original source code of Listing 4.1 (using fatal() helper)
> >> would look like:
> >>
> >> pid = fork(); //%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:fork]
> >> if (pid == 0) { //%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:if]
> >> /* child */ //%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:child]
> >> } else if (pid < 0) { //%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:else]
> >> /* parent, upon error */ //%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:errora]
> >> fatal("fork"); //%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:errorb]
> >> } else {
> >> /* parent, pid == child ID */ //%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:parent]
> >> }
> >>
> >> Corresponding source of the code snippet (after removal of "//") would
> >> look like:
> >>
> >> pid = fork();%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:fork]
> >> if (pid == 0) {%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:if]
> >> /* child */%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:child]
> >> } else if (pid < 0) {%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:else]
> >> /* parent, upon error */%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:errora]
> >> fatal("fork");%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:errorb]
> >> } else {
> >> /* parent, pid == child ID */%label[ln:toolsoftrade:fork:parent]
> >> }
> >>
> >> Note that in this example, "%" represents "\" after escaping to LaTeX,
> >> "[" for "{", "]" for "}". These 3 escaping characters need to be
> >> chosen for each snippet so that they do not appear in the unescaped code.
> >> "[" and "]" can not be used for snippets that used array reference,
> >> for example.
> >>
> >> So in theory, we can do what you want, but need somewhat ad-hoc
> >> manual tweaks. Still, it might be possible to write a script or two
> >> to do such tweaks in a semi-automated way.
> >
> > I already use scripts to do the auto-numbering and auto-intenting
> > for the old-style listings, so why not? ;-)
> >
> > If I haven't already made these available, please let me know and
> > I can send them on. They aren't exactly profound.
>
> So, there are 3 symbolic links under utilities/ in the Git repo:
>
> c2latex.sh -> /home/paulmck/bin/c2latex.sh
> extractClatex.sh -> /home/paulmck/bin/extractClatex.sh
> latex2c.sh -> /home/paulmck/bin/latex2c.sh
>
> Now I know why I have no idea how you manage code snippets. ;-)
Heh! I extract the code by hand and remove comments and any resulting
extraneous blank lines. I run it through c2latex.sh, and occasionally
need to manually fix indentation. Then I do any needed renumbering
manually in the text.
And latex2c.sh is more or less the inverse of c2latex.sh.
> >> If you'd like to see what the code snippet and reference to labels
> >> would be, I can prepare a experimental branch which is relative to
> >> commit f2b9d37d3b95 ("count: Expand on gap between C11 atomics and
> >> the Linux kernel").
> >>
> >> Thoughts?
> >
> > Sounds worth a try, thank you!
>
> OK.
> I'll send a pseudo pull request when it is ready.
> Hopefully in a couple of days.
Sounds good!
Thanx, Paul
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