On 2017/10/28 17:06, Yubin Ruan wrote:
> On Fri, Oct 27, 2017 at 04:05:49PM -0700, Paul E. McKenney wrote:
>> On Sat, Oct 28, 2017 at 12:02:19AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
>>> Hi Yubin,
>>>
>>> On 2017/10/27 18:23, Yubin Ruan wrote:
>>>> Hi paul,
>>>>
>>>> I finish chapter 7 and find some typo. Fixed in the patch below.
>>>>
>>>> Yubin
>>>>
>>>> diff --git a/locking/locking-existence.tex b/locking/locking-existence.tex
>>>> index 9fcbbf9..c7c4ae8 100644
>>>> --- a/locking/locking-existence.tex
>>>> +++ b/locking/locking-existence.tex
>>>> @@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ single partitionable data structure such as the hash table shown in the
>>>> figure, it can be problematic if a given data element can be a member
>>>> of multiple hash tables or given more-complex data structures such
>>>> as trees or graphs.
>>>> -These problems can be solved, in fact, such solutions form the basis
>>>> +These problems can be solved. In fact, such solutions form the basis
>>>
>>> I'd suggest the following:
>>>
>>> +These problems can be solved, in fact, and such solutions form the basis
>>
>> How about this?
>>
>> Not only can these problems be solved, but the solutions also
>> form the basis of lock-based software transactional memory [...].
>
> Thanks for your suggestion. I think Akira's approach looks more nature to me.
> So, let me finish this little patch ;-)
Well, I think Paul's suggestion is much clearer.
BTW Yubin, your mail has a date field indicating it came from the near future:
> Date: Sat, 28 Oct 2017 16:06:40 +0800
May be time zone setting issue?
Thanks, Akira
>
> Yubin
>
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>>From aede1ef2fe8c5213c8aec9581192c5915e69010c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
> From: Yubin Ruan <ablacktshirt@xxxxxxxxx>
> Date: Sat, 28 Oct 2017 16:00:43 +0800
> Subject: [PATCH] locking: a typo fixed
>
> Signed-off-by: Yubin Ruan <ablacktshirt@xxxxxxxxx>
> ---
> locking/locking-existence.tex | 2 +-
> 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
>
> diff --git a/locking/locking-existence.tex b/locking/locking-existence.tex
> index 9fcbbf9..2be69d8 100644
> --- a/locking/locking-existence.tex
> +++ b/locking/locking-existence.tex
> @@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ single partitionable data structure such as the hash table shown in the
> figure, it can be problematic if a given data element can be a member
> of multiple hash tables or given more-complex data structures such
> as trees or graphs.
> -These problems can be solved, in fact, such solutions form the basis
> +These problems can be solved, in fact, and such solutions form the basis
> of lock-based software transactional memory
> implementations~\cite{Shavit95,DaveDice2006DISC}.
> However,
>
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