On Thu, Aug 31, 2017 at 12:12:46AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: > >From 453e325a5fbfc1de64cb51d200fe744bbb79016f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 > From: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@xxxxxxxxx> > Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2017 23:55:37 +0900 > Subject: [PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use > > Fixes: 06ca30969d19 ("memorder: Acquire operations are not cumulative") > Signed-off-by: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@xxxxxxxxx> > --- > Paul, > > This "unless" doesn't make sense as the following clause is > "there are at most two threads involved". There should be > other word choices. It's up to you which one to use. Good catch, applied, thank you! Thanx, Paul > Thanks, Akira > -- > memorder/memorder.tex | 2 +- > 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) > > diff --git a/memorder/memorder.tex b/memorder/memorder.tex > index 3b4763e..78f2cc4 100644 > --- a/memorder/memorder.tex > +++ b/memorder/memorder.tex > @@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ failure. > Column ``C'' indicates cumulativity and propagation, as explained in > Sections~\ref{sec:memorder:Cumulativity} > and~\ref{sec:memorder:Propagation}. > -In the meantime, this column can always be ignored unless there > +In the meantime, this column can always be ignored when there > are at most two threads involved. > > \QuickQuiz{} > -- > 2.7.4 > -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe perfbook" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html