On 2016/04/27 09:53:57 -0700, Paul E. McKenney wrote: > On Thu, Apr 28, 2016 at 12:21:48AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: > [snip] > >> However, the newly added Table 14.2 "A Variable With More Simultaneous Values" >> seems like it is not complete yet. Is that the case? > > Please see attached for what it looks like to me. Well, this is identical to the one I built. So, do you intend to explicitly put numbers which show up fairly long time, and leave other cells blank even below changes of values denoted by (n) in italics? > >> Looks like you used some custom script or something to generate the table >> from a raw data that contains when each cpu sees the updates. >> >> Do you have a plan to replace the Table with a Figure something like >> Figure 14.5 "A Variable With Multiple Simultaneous Values"? > > I briefly considered coloring the table cells, but got distracted. That kind of work would be made easy if you make a script or something to generate the latex source of the table. The problem is the script itself might take time to make it work properly. I could be of help in that area. > > I am not sure that making a 14.5-like barchart would be all that > readable... But please feel free to prove me wrong. There would be a number of very narrow bars hard to recognize. It would also be impossible to see there are fourteen different opinions at time 20. Yes, a table seems a better way to represent this. > >> If you do, I'll refrain from touching the Table. Rather, I'd be interested >> in improving the script you might be using, if any. >> >> Another totally unrelated question is about the URL you placed in >> Section C.7: "http://www.openvms.compaq.com/wizard/wiz_2637.html";. >> Sadly, this URL is no longer valid. Do you happen to aware of an alternative >> URL still accessible today? > > This one: http://h71000.www7.hp.com/wizard/wiz_2637.html > >> By looking up a Wikipedia article, I found a page at >> http://h18002.www1.hp.com/alphaserver/technology/chip-docs.html, >> which is "Archived technical documentation library" of Alpha >> containing links to technical documentation for Alpha microprocessors >> and Alpha ATX motherboards. Is there a document there which can be >> referred to instead of the above mentioned URL? > > Ah, I see... I blew it and included the URL verbatim in the text. > It should be replaced with \cite{Compaq01}. > > Fixed, with your Reported-by! Thank you! Oh, you are most welcome! Thanks, Akira > > Thanx, Paul > -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe perfbook" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
