Thanks for all the feedback! I have incorporated all except for diagrams for slides 7 and 18. If I get time after work today, I will do that. The shadow on fonts is because of format of slides provided by organisers. I will edit it to remove the shadow. No I haven't presented at this scale so thanks for the tips. Best regards, Okash On Tue, Aug 13, 2019 at 9:08 AM Samuel Thibault <samuel.thibault@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Hello, > > The slides look good overall :) > > For better readability (accessibility too? ;) ), I would say to avoid > the small shadow being letters. > > I don't know which distros ship it, I'm afraid mostly only > accessibility-oriented ones. But going out of staging will help so much > on that front :) > > On slide 6 the URL is split, you can reduce its font size a bit. > > On slide 10 you could add a picture of the synth you have :) > > On slide 13 you should write on the slide the answer to the > why-synth-to-CPU question, for people who will miss it in your talk: > synths report their speaking progress. > > Slide 16: yes, a diagram would be useful :) > > If you have the time before the deadline, on slides 7 and 18 you could > draw a picture to show the flow. > > > I don't know if you have already made this kind of presentation. If > not, I strongly advise to train :) for two reasons: > > - train by yourself to get an idea of how it fits in the 35 minutes you > have, to know how much time you can spend on the details. > > - train in from of colleagues or friends (who have some technical > understanding), just to check how it feels to talk about it in front > of people :) and get their feedback as well (even if you will not be > able to change the slides). > > Samuel _______________________________________________ Speakup mailing list Speakup@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://linux-speakup.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/speakup
