Hello, The slides look good overall :) For better readability (accessibility too? ;) ), I would say to avoid the small shadow being letters. I don't know which distros ship it, I'm afraid mostly only accessibility-oriented ones. But going out of staging will help so much on that front :) On slide 6 the URL is split, you can reduce its font size a bit. On slide 10 you could add a picture of the synth you have :) On slide 13 you should write on the slide the answer to the why-synth-to-CPU question, for people who will miss it in your talk: synths report their speaking progress. Slide 16: yes, a diagram would be useful :) If you have the time before the deadline, on slides 7 and 18 you could draw a picture to show the flow. I don't know if you have already made this kind of presentation. If not, I strongly advise to train :) for two reasons: - train by yourself to get an idea of how it fits in the 35 minutes you have, to know how much time you can spend on the details. - train in from of colleagues or friends (who have some technical understanding), just to check how it feels to talk about it in front of people :) and get their feedback as well (even if you will not be able to change the slides). Samuel _______________________________________________ Speakup mailing list Speakup@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://linux-speakup.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/speakup
