ChiYuan Huang <u0084500@xxxxxxxxx> 於 2022年7月20日 週三 下午5:45寫道：
>
> On Fri, Jul 15, 2022 at 08:29:42PM +0200, Andy Shevchenko wrote:
> > On Fri, Jul 15, 2022 at 1:29 PM ChiaEn Wu <peterwu.pub@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> > >
> > > From: ChiYuan Huang <cy_huang@xxxxxxxxxxx>
> > >
> > > The MediaTek MT6370 is a highly-integrated smart power management IC,
> > > which includes a single cell Li-Ion/Li-Polymer switching battery
> > > charger, a USB Type-C & Power Delivery (PD) controller, dual
> > > Flash LED current sources, a RGB LED driver, a backlight WLED driver,
> > > a display bias driver and a general LDO for portable devices.
> > >
> > > In MediaTek MT6370, there are four channel current-sink RGB LEDs that
> > > support hardware pattern for constant current, PWM, and breath mode.
> > > Isink4 channel can also be used as a CHG_VIN power good indicator.
> >
> > ...
> >
> > > + This driver can also be built as a module. If so the module
> >
> > so, the
> >
> > > + will be called "leds-mt6370.ko".
> >
> > No ".ko".
> >
> > Why did you ignore these comments? Please go and fix _everywhere_ in
> > your series.
> > It's basically the rule of thumb, if the reviewer gives a comment
> > against an occurrence of something, go through entire series and check
> > if there are other places like commented one and address them all.
> >
> > ...
> >
> > > + * Author: Alice Chen <alice_chen@xxxxxxxxxxx>
> >
> > Strange, the commit message doesn't have a corresponding SoB, why?
> >
> Yes, there're two authors Alice and me.
> I'll correct it in next.
> > ...
> >
> > > +#define MT6370_PWM_DUTY 31
> > > +#define MT6372_PMW_DUTY 255
> >
> > Looks like these are limits by hardware?
> > Check with the datasheet if (BIT(x) - 1) makes more sense here.
> >
> > ...
> >
> > > + switch (led_no) {
> > > + case MT6370_LED_ISNK1:
> > > + sel_field = F_LED1_DUTY;
> > > + break;
> > > + case MT6370_LED_ISNK2:
> > > + sel_field = F_LED2_DUTY;
> > > + break;
> > > + case MT6370_LED_ISNK3:
> > > + sel_field = F_LED3_DUTY;
> > > + break;
> > > + default:
> > > + sel_field = F_LED4_DUTY;
> >
> > Missed break;
> >
> > > + }
> >
> > ...
> >
> > > + switch (led_no) {
> > > + case MT6370_LED_ISNK1:
> > > + sel_field = F_LED1_FREQ;
> > > + break;
> > > + case MT6370_LED_ISNK2:
> > > + sel_field = F_LED2_FREQ;
> > > + break;
> > > + case MT6370_LED_ISNK3:
> > > + sel_field = F_LED3_FREQ;
> > > + break;
> > > + default:
> > > + sel_field = F_LED4_FREQ;
> >
> > Ditto.
> >
> > > + }
> >
> > ...
> >
> > > + switch (led_no) {
> > > + case MT6370_LED_ISNK1:
> > > + case MT6370_LED_ISNK2:
> > > + case MT6370_LED_ISNK3:
> > > + *base = MT6370_REG_RGB1_TR + led_no * 3;
> > > + break;
> > > + default:
> > > + *base = MT6370_REG_RGB_CHRIND_TR;
> >
> > Ditto.
> > It seems you dropped them for all switch-cases. It's not goot, please
> > restore them back.
> >
> > > + }
> >
> > ...
> >
> > > + u8 val[P_MAX_PATTERNS / 2] = {0};
> >
> > { } should suffice
> >
> >
> In the above range selector, we use the 'logic or' to generate the
typo, it's 'below'.
> pattern values.
>
> If to change it from '{0} to '{ }', is it correct?
> > > + /*
> > > + * Pattern list
> > > + * tr1: byte 0, b'[7: 4]
> > > + * tr2: byte 0, b'[3: 0]
> > > + * tf1: byte 1, b'[7: 4]
> > > + * tf2: byte 1, b'[3: 0]
> > > + * ton: byte 2, b'[7: 4]
> > > + * toff: byte 2, b'[3: 0]
> > > + */
> > > + for (i = 0; i < P_MAX_PATTERNS; i++) {
> > > + curr = pattern + i;
> > > +
> > > + sel_range = i == P_LED_TOFF ? R_LED_TOFF : R_LED_TRFON;
> > > +
> > > + linear_range_get_selector_within(priv->ranges + sel_range,
> > > + curr->delta_t, &sel);
> > > +
> > > + val[i / 2] |= sel << (4 * ((i + 1) % 2));
> > > + }
> > > +
> > > + memcpy(pattern_val, val, 3);
> > > + return 0;
> > > +}
> >
> > ...
> >
> > > +out:
> >
> > out_unlock:
> >
> > > + mutex_unlock(&priv->lock);
> > > +
> > > + return ret;
> >
> > ...
> >
> > > +out:
> >
> > Ditto. And so on.
> >
> > > + mutex_unlock(&priv->lock);
> > > +
> > > + return ret;
> >
> > ...
> >
> > > + sub_led = devm_kzalloc(priv->dev,
> > > + sizeof(*sub_led) * MC_CHANNEL_NUM,
> > > + GFP_KERNEL);
> >
> > NIH devm_kcalloc(). Also check if you really need zeroed data.
> >
> Ok, and after the check, I also need to add one line to set the intensity to 0.
> > > + if (!sub_led)
> > > + return -ENOMEM;
> >
> > ...
> >
> > > + ret = fwnode_property_read_u32(child, "color", &color);
> > > + if (ret) {
> > > + dev_err(priv->dev,
> > > + "led %d, no color specified\n",
> > > + led->index);
> > > + return ret;
> >
> > return dev_err_probe(...) ; ?
> >
> > Ditto for many places in your entire series.
> >
> > > + }
> >
> > ...
> >
> > > + priv = devm_kzalloc(&pdev->dev,
> > > + struct_size(priv, leds, count), GFP_KERNEL);
> >
> > At least one parameter can be placed on the previous line.
> >
> > > + if (!priv)
> > > + return -ENOMEM;
> >
> > --
> > With Best Regards,
> > Andy Shevchenko
