On Thu, 3 Dec 2020 22:20:16 -0800 Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > Do basic editing & correction to amd-sfh-hid.rst: > - fix punctuation > - use HID instead of hid consistently > - fix grammar, verb tense > > Signed-off-by: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@xxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Cc: Jiri Kosina <jikos@xxxxxxxxxx> > Cc: Jonathan Cameron <jic23@xxxxxxxxxx> > Cc: Srinivas Pandruvada <srinivas.pandruvada@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx> > Cc: linux-input@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Cc: linux-iio@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx > Cc: Jonathan Corbet <corbet@xxxxxxx> > Cc: linux-doc@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Trivial suggested addition inline. > --- > Documentation/hid/amd-sfh-hid.rst | 16 ++++++++-------- > 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) > > --- linux-next-20201201.orig/Documentation/hid/amd-sfh-hid.rst > +++ linux-next-20201201/Documentation/hid/amd-sfh-hid.rst > @@ -3,7 +3,7 @@ > > AMD Sensor Fusion Hub > ===================== > -AMD Sensor Fusion Hub (SFH) is part of an SOC starting from Ryzen based platforms. > +AMD Sensor Fusion Hub (SFH) is part of an SOC starting from Ryzen-based platforms. > The solution is working well on several OEM products. AMD SFH uses HID over PCIe bus. > In terms of architecture it resembles ISH, however the major difference is all > the HID reports are generated as part of the kernel driver. > @@ -45,20 +45,20 @@ the HID reports are generated as part of > AMD HID Transport Layer > ----------------------- > AMD SFH transport is also implemented as a bus. Each client application executing in the AMD MP2 is > -registered as a device on this bus. Here: MP2 which is an ARM core connected to x86 for processing > +registered as a device on this bus. Here, MP2 is an ARM core connected to x86 for processing > sensor data. The layer, which binds each device (AMD SFH HID driver) identifies the device type and > -registers with the hid core. Transport layer attach a constant "struct hid_ll_driver" object with > +registers with the HID core. Transport layer attaches a constant "struct hid_ll_driver" object with > each device. Once a device is registered with HID core, the callbacks provided via this struct are > used by HID core to communicate with the device. AMD HID Transport layer implements the synchronous calls. > > AMD HID Client Layer > -------------------- > -This layer is responsible to implement HID request and descriptors. As firmware is OS agnostic, HID > +This layer is responsible to implement HID requests and descriptors. As firmware is OS agnostic, HID > client layer fills the HID request structure and descriptors. HID client layer is complex as it is > -interface between MP2 PCIe layer and HID. HID client layer initialized the MP2 PCIe layer and holds > +interface between MP2 PCIe layer and HID. HID client layer initializes the MP2 PCIe layer and holds > the instance of MP2 layer. It identifies the number of sensors connected using MP2-PCIe layer. Base Based ? (maybe) > -on that allocates the DRAM address for each and every sensor and pass it to MP2-PCIe driver.On > -enumeration of each the sensor, client layer fills the HID Descriptor structure and HID input repor > +on that allocates the DRAM address for each and every sensor and passes it to MP2-PCIe driver. On > +enumeration of each sensor, client layer fills the HID Descriptor structure and HID input report > structure. HID Feature report structure is optional. The report descriptor structure varies from > sensor to sensor. > > @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ The communication between X86 and MP2 is > 2. Data transfer via DRAM. > 3. Supported sensor info via P2C registers. > > -Commands are sent to MP2 using C2P Mailbox registers. Writing into C2P Message registers generate > +Commands are sent to MP2 using C2P Mailbox registers. Writing into C2P Message registers generates > interrupt to MP2. The client layer allocates the physical memory and the same is sent to MP2 via > the PCI layer. MP2 firmware writes the command output to the access DRAM memory which the client > layer has allocated. Firmware always writes minimum of 32 bytes into DRAM. So as a protocol driver
