Re: [PATCH 0/5] docs/zh_CN: Improve language in zh_CN/process/

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Hi Xiangcheng,

Thanks for polishing patchset, but i can find your patches in my email box.
and even in lkml. Except https://lkml.org/lkml/2021/2/14/33 the first patch.
Do I missed others?


在 2021/2/18 下午6:24, Wu XiangCheng 写道:
> There are some errors in some files in zh_CN/process/, such as grammatical 
> errors, translation errors and improper use of words etc., which make it 

Could you like to point out each of specific incorrect words with reasons?
Like the following incorrect I found in your patch:

A, And end users, too, will often wish to change Linux to make it
   better suit their needs.
  
   +最终用户也常常希望修改Linux,使之年能更好地满足他们的需求。
   I couldn't find a word means '年'/year in original context, do you?

B, Contribution of code is the fundamental action which makes the whole
   process work.

+- 代码的贡献是使整个流程顺畅的根本

the point of the process is 工作/workable, your transltion change it to
process 顺畅/fluency, why?


Thanks! 

> difficult for native speakers to understand. Many errors are caused by 
> machine translation without manual correction.
> 
> This set of patchs aims to fix the above problems and synchronize them with
> original files. Some structure modifications need to rewrite the whole 
> sentences, so here are a lot of changes.
> 
> Wu XiangCheng (5):
>   docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/index.rst
>   docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/1.Intro.rst
>   docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/2.Process.rst
>   docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/3.Early-stage.rst
>   docs/zh_CN: Improve zh_CN/process/4.Coding.rst
> 
>  .../translations/zh_CN/process/1.Intro.rst    | 146 ++++-----
>  .../translations/zh_CN/process/2.Process.rst  | 296 +++++++++---------
>  .../zh_CN/process/3.Early-stage.rst           | 120 +++----
>  .../translations/zh_CN/process/4.Coding.rst   | 251 ++++++++-------
>  .../translations/zh_CN/process/index.rst      |  10 +-
>  5 files changed, 412 insertions(+), 411 deletions(-)
> 



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