Re: Grammar issue(s) in documentation

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On Tue, Mar 04, 2025 at 10:41:08AM +1100, Joshua Rose wrote:
> I just wanted to briefly point out that as a native English speaker I
> found the following text significantly hard to read.
> 
> "Do not worry installing your kernel manually and thus bypassing your
> distribution’s packaging system will totally mess up your machine: all
> parts of your kernel are easy to remove later, as files are stored in
> two places only and normally identifiable by the kernel’s release
> name."[1]
> 
> I found this very hard to read. I would probably re-phrase this as
> follows, but I'd be completely open - and in fact encourage - any
> suggestions on the rephrasing of the excerpt.
> 
> "Do not attempt to circumvent your distribution's packaging system by
> installing your kernel manually; this will likely break your machine.
> Components of your kernel can be selectively removed later on.  Such
> components (files) are stored in two locations, both identifiable
> by the kernel's release name."

I think that's the opposite of what they meant.  I understand it as:

"Feel free to circumvent your distribution's package manager as it's
easy to remove the kernel afterwards".

But hey, what do I know?




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