On 15:39-20130226, Randy Dunlap wrote: > On 02/26/13 15:10, Nishanth Menon wrote: > > On 14:43-20130226, Randy Dunlap wrote: > >> On 02/26/13 09:37, Nishanth Menon wrote: > > [..] > >>> > >>> 1. Introduction > >>> =============== > >>> +1.1 What is an Operating Performance Point (OPP)? > >>> + > >>> Complex SoCs of today consists of a multiple sub-modules working in conjunction. > >>> In an operational system executing varied use cases, not all modules in the SoC > >>> need to function at their highest performing frequency all the time. To > >>> facilitate this, sub-modules in a SoC are grouped into domains, allowing some > >>> domains to run at lower voltage and frequency while other domains are loaded > >>> -more. The set of discrete tuples consisting of frequency and voltage pairs that > >>> +more. > >> > >> huh??? > > I split the definition line to it's own paragraph below. But, I think > > you intend to say we could improve better the remaining paragraph. > > Could you elaborate your thoughts? > > "while other domains are loaded more." Some people probably understand > that OK; I dunno. I would rather see it written out more verbosely, e.g.: > > "while other domains run at voltage/frequency pairs that are higher." You are right, being verbose here makes sense. I will pick up your wording here in v2. Thanks for reviewing and helping improve. > > but partly I was confused by the diff(1) lines. my bad :( no worries. -- Regards, Nishanth Menon -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe linux-doc" in the body of a message to majordomo@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx More majordomo info at http://vger.kernel.org/majordomo-info.html
