On Tue, Oct 02, 2012 at 01:04:53PM +0300, Ali Polatel wrote: > Hello everyone, > > Here is a cover of an old song whose singer passed away today... > Sad coincidence, I was trying to play this song on my midi keyboard when I > heard he is gone... > > mostly qtractor + whysynth > Trying to learn those two... > Comments, critics most welcome! Nice little melody, cool sounds, and interestingly whacky interlude. What's wanting here is some imagination in the mix and polishing of the sounds and effects. The vocals could indeed have been more assertive, but I also think they would have benefited greatly from being double-tracked or at least have had a ping-pong delay on them. The interlude fails to catch mostly because it's all happening in mono; if you use panning and phasing, along with other effects and filters, you could get something quite dynamic. In short, it's good, but it feels a little unfinished. Keep it up! Cheers, s.M. _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user
