Hello, Good stuff this morning, especially with a nice cup of tea... Couple of things... On Tue, Dec 27, 2011 at 10:46:12PM +0000, Folderol wrote: > Well, back in harness again. > > Thanks again for the suggestions. > > I've reduced the bass, It's just right now. > faded down the running arpeggios selectively, You might consider taking a little bit of its bite (High freqs) away as well... > added a little 'brightness' to one of the parts that makes up the main lead > instrument, Balances things out nicely. > added another pan flute as a counter melody for the second section, Great idea. It might feel more "right" if it were a little wetter or maybe the first one drier. > added another very faint instrument towards the end of the last section, > perfomed some detail editing, > revised the stereo positioning, > made various mix adjustments. > Phew! Excellent work! My only other final nitpicking observation might be that one pad exhibits a little bit of low-mid exuberance on lower octaves: one example is at 03:28. It might benefit from some gentle taming. Cheers, S.M. _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user
