Hi Oleg, I took a listen on my studio computer and it appears you are correct, there's something wrong with the stereo output on my laptop...:-( Sounded much better now, cool bass! Though I still think the guitar is a bit too dominant and would be better if lowered a few dB Regards, Robert 2010/7/6 Oleg Ivanenko <oivanenko@xxxxxxxxx>: > Hi, Robert! > Thank you very much for your opinion. > I think that disbalance between bass and guitar caused your laptop speakers. > It is 60's childish song, so I wanted to recreate "uncontemporary", > "undisciplined" panoraming of instruments -- bass at left, guitar at right > and drums at center. So, if your speakers can't reproduce bass in left > channel you hear too loud guitar in right channel. Try to listen my first > mix&master attempt -- http://kompoz.com/t/91171, but I find it unsuccessfull > because of too overcompressed and loud bass. > About intro -- I think your sense of "incompletness" caused, consistent with > bass-issue, by too quiet bass drum(kick). I am working on that defer to > Harry's advice right now. > And yes, this song about the rain :). Briefly, it is said that inspite of > rain and cloudy sky I will not affray and sun will definitely rising again. > Try to understand automated translation of lyrics > -- http://translate.google.ru/translate?hl=ru&sl=ru&tl=en&u=http://www.shansonprofi.ru/person/lebedinskaya/lyrics/lebedinskaya_nebo_v_tuchah_pervaya_pesnya_napisannaya_v_6_m_klas.html > 2010/7/6 Robert Jonsson <spamatica@xxxxxxxxx> >> >> Hi Oleg, >> >> Listening on a laptop here (in the sun outside, ahhhhh, thank god for >> summer) >> As Harry mentioned the drums are a bit low, but for me it's more that >> the lead guitar is way too high in volume. >> The bass is mostly inaudible with these tiny speakers, perhaps it's >> possible to eq in some low-mids in the bass. >> >> I'm no expert but I would change the intro, perhaps remove the drums >> for a few bars (or the otherway around), it sounds a bit unfinished to >> me, or perhaps it's due to that I can't hear the bass.. >> >> Apart from that a solid song, I like the break part with the rain(!?!) >> in the background :-) >> I also like that it's in russian though I can't understand a word. >> >> Regards, >> Robert >> >> 2010/7/6 Oleg Ivanenko <oivanenko@xxxxxxxxx>: >> > Hi! >> > Thanks for opinion and for note about direct link. >> > >> > 2010/7/6 M Watts <zwy648rct@xxxxxxxxx> >> >> >> >> On 07/05/2010 06:46 PM, Oleg Ivanenko wrote: >> >> >> >>> I have completed new(actually old) song recently -- >> >>> http://kompoz.com/t/91208 >> >> >> >> I really like this one; what else can I say? :) >> >> >> >> (Btw, for those w/o flash, there's a direct link to the mp3 in the >> >> page's >> >> source.) >> >> _______________________________________________ >> >> Linux-audio-user mailing list >> >> Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> >> http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user >> > >> > >> > >> > -- >> > Truly yours, Oleg Ivanenko aka Ash >> > [if it wasn't so sad, it would be funny] >> > >> > _______________________________________________ >> > Linux-audio-user mailing list >> > Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> > http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user >> > >> > >> _______________________________________________ >> Linux-audio-user mailing list >> Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx >> http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user > > > > -- > Truly yours, Oleg Ivanenko aka Ash > [if it wasn't so sad, it would be funny] > _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user
