Hi, Robert!
Thank you very much for your opinion.
I think that disbalance between bass and guitar caused your laptop speakers.
It is 60's childish song, so I wanted to recreate "uncontemporary", "undisciplined" panoraming of instruments -- bass at left, guitar at right and drums at center. So, if your speakers can't reproduce bass in left channel you hear too loud guitar in right channel. Try to listen my first mix&master attempt -- http://kompoz.com/t/91171, but I find it unsuccessfull because of too overcompressed and loud bass.
About intro -- I think your sense of "incompletness" caused, consistent with bass-issue, by too quiet bass drum(kick). I am working on that defer to Harry's advice right now.
And yes, this song about the rain :). Briefly, it is said that inspite of rain and cloudy sky I will not affray and sun will definitely rising again. Try to understand automated translation of lyrics -- http://translate.google.ru/translate?hl=ru&sl=ru&tl=en&u=http://www.shansonprofi.ru/person/lebedinskaya/lyrics/lebedinskaya_nebo_v_tuchah_pervaya_pesnya_napisannaya_v_6_m_klas.html
2010/7/6 Robert Jonsson <spamatica@xxxxxxxxx>
Hi Oleg,
Listening on a laptop here (in the sun outside, ahhhhh, thank god for summer)
As Harry mentioned the drums are a bit low, but for me it's more that
the lead guitar is way too high in volume.
The bass is mostly inaudible with these tiny speakers, perhaps it's
possible to eq in some low-mids in the bass.
I'm no expert but I would change the intro, perhaps remove the drums
for a few bars (or the otherway around), it sounds a bit unfinished to
me, or perhaps it's due to that I can't hear the bass..
Apart from that a solid song, I like the break part with the rain(!?!)
in the background :-)
I also like that it's in russian though I can't understand a word.
Regards,
Robert
2010/7/6 Oleg Ivanenko <oivanenko@xxxxxxxxx>:
> Hi!
> Thanks for opinion and for note about direct link.
>
> 2010/7/6 M Watts <zwy648rct@xxxxxxxxx>
>>
>> On 07/05/2010 06:46 PM, Oleg Ivanenko wrote:
>>
>>> I have completed new(actually old) song recently --
>>> http://kompoz.com/t/91208
>>
>> I really like this one; what else can I say? :)
>>
>> (Btw, for those w/o flash, there's a direct link to the mp3 in the page's
>> source.)
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