On Thu, May 6, 2010 at 11:18 PM, Julien Claassen <julien@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > Hello everyone! > So finally I got some new music ready. It's very 80s this time, I know I > proclamed more than once, that this is not my decade, but April is not my > month, so the two deserve each other. :-) The song is called "Enemy April > fool" and can be downloaded/listened to here: Good prog rock arrangement, great progression. The quality of instruments and the recording is great from what I can tell on these headphones here. I don't like the drum timing at all, it feels off-beat and delayed. It should be punctuating and rock solid. Don't humanize this. Drummers aren't humans %) Your voice is rather deep and deserves a completely different arrangement... it's mostly drowned by the rest of the arrangement. I hardly understand the lyrics. That, or the song would tremendously benefit from transposing the vocals an octave or at least a few notes higher. Also, some backing vocals would also add a lot. _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user
