Oleg Ivanenko wrote: > I've recently finished long-awaited(for me) instrumental composition > (http://www.archive.org/download/IFlying/Ash_Ya_Lechu_I_Flying_986.mp3) > and need your opinions about it. If you please, tell me about my > composition/arrangement/performance/mastering etc mistakes. > > Hi Oleg, A few comments: The flute/piccolo/whistle instrument doesn't add anything structurally. The piece is clearly focused on the guitar sounds, I think I'd like it better if the flute sound was replaced by another guitar part. I wanted to hear some more significant crescendi. I think you could vary the surface of the piece by playing with dynamics more. (I was going to say "playing with dynamic curves" but I don't want to tempt my fellow LAUyers). The individual parts are well-composed and nicely performed. Some more touches in the dynamics and balances might give it a little more intensity. Btw, I listened to it on headphones, perhaps my critique will change when I can play it on the main speakers here. Best, dp _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user
