Llewellyn Beasley wrote: > > I've not posted around here much but I've finished up a song and would > like opinions if anyone's interested in giving them. > Okay, I'll jump. The mix throughout is good, nicely balanced, but I agree that at times your drum groove is just a little bit too relaxed. To my ears there is often an audible flamming between the snare and the downbeat, personally I'd tighten it up a bit. On another personal note: I know you call it a song, but to me it's more of a groove loop (though the progression at ~4' is noticeable). More formal variety would be welcome, and vocals usually create what I call a song. Of course you can always claim inspiration from Mendelssohn. :) The recorded sound is very good, as is the playing. The guitars are especially sweet. I agree with the respondent who advised letting it sit for a week. Return to it with a fresh outlook, see what happens, post it again. Gee, that's such good advice I think I should start following it myself. :) Thanks for sharing ! Best, dp _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo/linux-audio-user
