"julien lociuro" <julien.lociuro@xxxxxxxxx> writes: > Here is my try at composing a lyric, > never done such thing before in this > fashion in a great while so please take it with a grain of salt and you > dont have to use it if its crap, or > doesnt fit your style, whatever. > A Wonderfull Day > I want to see your crystal eyes Even > knowing they are just a lie A robotic > sound might emphasize The truth i share > in my synthetic dice > No, no, no, you dont know Knowing is not > how you will find The truth lies on a > sober heart And this my friend i dare to > say > Lets make a perfect union My sober heart > and your crystal eyes Spliced in one > million bytes Flowing trough a great > river Reaching grandma dad and son > I could go even further Not today, nor > tomorrow let the time decides its way Rest > in peace a wonderfull day > > > Thanks. It looks good :-) Well, I cannot say I will use it. I will meditate on it. I want to feel it and if it triggers emotions, then I'll > be able to try compose accordingly.. > If I use it, the idea is that I want to make many versions with the same lyrics..and share it with you..so you can say which one you prefer > or you think is more appropriate with the lyrics context.. > Sure also if you find your way on it and feel a need to alter it somehow i would like to see what could be improved to have a better musicality, so feel free to alter it as you see fit. And if you not use it there is no problem, keep searching if so and show us what you will come up with. Cheers, Glauber. _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/mailman/listinfo.cgi/linux-audio-user
