>>But then the melody comes in and ruins it. Off the top of my head I'd >>scrap the melody completely and use the harmonies VERY sparingly as >>orchestra jabs. > > > Hrmpf. Well, I see where you're coming from. For a club track, I would > definitely have to at least reduce the lead. But without, it doesn't > have the feel I wanted. While working on it, I often asked myself if > there's a nice kind of tension or if it just bites, though. Yeah... well, when I first listened to techno I couldn't stand the stuff. So if you'd get your stuff to be played a lot in clubs I go to I would probably get used to it and enjoy it without changes (including the title). Carlo