Sup Thorsten! The Intro is Earth-Shaking. Good Stuff. Hard techno and borderline psychedelic. Almost a tune I could hear played in St. Gallen's very own ElectroKeller. But then the melody comes in and ruins it. Off the top of my head I'd scrap the melody completely and use the harmonies VERY sparingly as orchestra jabs. I'd also get a title that sounds 'cool' :) Carlo
