On Mon, 30 May, 2005 at 02:33PM +1000, Shayne O'Connor spake thus: > Dave Robillard wrote: > > On Mon, 2005-30-05 at 04:01 +0100, james@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote: > > > >>Hi peeps, > >> Here's quite a short test of a track I'm working on: > >> http://dis-dot-dat.net/music/alltehtriptest.ogg > >> > >> It's not my usual style > >> (http://dis-dot-dat.net/index.cgi?item=/music/), and I'm not sure > >> about the result. > >> > >> Please let me know what you think, what's wrong with it, where you > >> might think it would be best going, etc. I'm really just feeling my > >> way into this kind of music, so any help is greatly appreciated. > > > > > > More bass! > > > > > i have to agree - the bassline that's buried right back there should > probly be right up front ;) > > otherwise, i'm diggin the kinky-noir feel, and the slinky embellishments. Kinky-noir? Is that a real term? I like it. It really describes what I was after. Cheers > go for it. > > shayne > -- "I'd crawl over an acre of 'Visual This++' and 'Integrated Development That' to get to gcc, Emacs, and gdb. Thank you." (By Vance Petree, Virginia Power)