Dave Robillard wrote: > On Mon, 2005-30-05 at 04:01 +0100, james@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx wrote: > >>Hi peeps, >> Here's quite a short test of a track I'm working on: >> http://dis-dot-dat.net/music/alltehtriptest.ogg >> >> It's not my usual style >> (http://dis-dot-dat.net/index.cgi?item=/music/), and I'm not sure >> about the result. >> >> Please let me know what you think, what's wrong with it, where you >> might think it would be best going, etc. I'm really just feeling my >> way into this kind of music, so any help is greatly appreciated. > > > More bass! > i have to agree - the bassline that's buried right back there should probly be right up front ;) otherwise, i'm diggin the kinky-noir feel, and the slinky embellishments. go for it. shayne
