On Wed, 26 Apr 2017 09:14:02 +0200 (CEST) "Jeanette C." <julien@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote: > http://juliencoder.de/nama/archives/final/07-interlude3.ogg > http://juliencoder.de/nama/archives/final/08-summer_afternoon.ogg The 'Interlude3' is a bit too repetitive perhaps. The idea of the percussion is quite interesting. In general the way it goes is quite good, the progression of chords, the theme. The only thing would be to have a 'break' of some sort that makes it possible to return to the main theme in a grand manner. 'Summer Afternoon' however doe snot lack any developments. As a piece of progressive rock it stands its ground very well, notwithstanding better recording, etc... In the range of Anglagard, Flower Kings, and other prog bands. It shows every element that's needed to make a piece in that genre. The role of the bass is important and adds a lot to the overall harmonic presence. A bit of a fretless sound, a bit of sliding here and there would be nice. We hear some, but with more of a character. This piece has a lot of good ideas that could be driven for a re-recording for this style. In such a case, synth sounds would be adjusted for the character of each part. Hmmm.. Lacks guitar ! :) Cheers, Al _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user
