Why tanks :) You pretty much sum up what I think, we could be in the
same band, I guess ; This morning I can't even THINK about this guitar
part. Are the voices / reverbs OK? I can't tell now.
https://soundcloud.com/yassinphilip/reel-time
Thanks to everybody for listening!
yPhil
On 27/10/2016 05:54, jonetsu wrote:
On Thu, 27 Oct 2016 02:53:54 +0100
Yassin Philip <philcm@xxxxxxx> wrote:
https://soundcloud.com/yassinphilip/reel-time
This time with punch and warmth. Starts very good, the feeling is put
in place quickly after a short intro, the voice is very good. The bass
carries the warmth and makes a very good tandem with the drums.
Keyboard gives this airy atmosphere for dreams.
I still feel that there should be something happening at one point.
Perhaps only a slight modulation, a slight orchestral change, even if
the piece is short. To come back to the main section with something
added. The 'lead' sound that starts at approx. 2:10 might not be exactly
what the piece needs IMHO to make the contrast between dreams and
'real'. It kind of cringe along. 'real' is not necessarily that bad :)
Cheers.
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