On Thu, 27 Oct 2016 02:53:54 +0100 Yassin Philip <philcm@xxxxxxx> wrote: > https://soundcloud.com/yassinphilip/reel-time This time with punch and warmth. Starts very good, the feeling is put in place quickly after a short intro, the voice is very good. The bass carries the warmth and makes a very good tandem with the drums. Keyboard gives this airy atmosphere for dreams. I still feel that there should be something happening at one point. Perhaps only a slight modulation, a slight orchestral change, even if the piece is short. To come back to the main section with something added. The 'lead' sound that starts at approx. 2:10 might not be exactly what the piece needs IMHO to make the contrast between dreams and 'real'. It kind of cringe along. 'real' is not necessarily that bad :) Cheers. _______________________________________________ Linux-audio-user mailing list Linux-audio-user@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx http://lists.linuxaudio.org/listinfo/linux-audio-user
