Robert, thanks for your review. All, thanks for your responses and text updates. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Mar 13, 2020, at 11:16 AM, Robert Sparks via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-ov-egress-01 > Reviewer: Robert Sparks > Review Date: 2020-03-13 > IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-18 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: Ready for publication as a Proposed Standard RFC > > Very minor nit - feel free to ignore - > > This sentence slowed me down when reading: > > As the origin AS may be modified by outbound policy, policy semantics > based on RPKI Origin Validation state MUST be able to be applied > separately on distribution into BGP and on egress. > > I suggest something like: > > As the origin AS may be modified by outbound policy, a BGP speaker > MUST be able to apply policy semantics based on RPKI Origin Validation > state separately on distribution into BGP and on egress. > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
