Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@xxxxxxxxx> writes: > My apologies for getting in some minor comments so late. I do not > suggest any technical changes. However, at least to my eye, there are > some little glitches and editorial changes I would suggest. Thanks for the detailed review, comments and suggestions Donald. Responses inline below. Any thing *not* mentioned below should consider accepted :-) A few of the editorial changes I left unchanged as well, since I suspect the RFC Editor will likely make the final call on whether commas are needed in certain spots when you and I disagree on whether they're needed or not. The full diff of changes from applying your changes can be found here: https://github.com/wkumari/draft-wkumari-dnsop-extended-error/commit/adcd34da305737e57964676cd1376263e8803239 > [deletion of the rfc editor note] I left this in, since it easily flags where help is needed. > (SERVFAIL, NXDOMAIN, REFUSED, -and even- NOERROR, etc) You removed "and even" but I'm leaving it in, since there was a lot of discussion around NOERROR and how that seemed odd to people. The extract "and even" text helps calls needed attention to it, IMHO. > "Because long EXTRA-TEXT fields may trigger truncation, > which is undesirable given the supplemental nature of > EDE." I left this sentence as a hybrid of what you suggested (removing most of the second half), leaving in the supplemental component since I believe that also is a subtle thing that should be called out. Maybe others believe your text is better though? I left in your suggested "on the ... [IANA] web page as follows:", but I'm not sure that's the right text either. We want the creation of a registry, which *happens* to be listed on a web page as well. I also do not add the "reserved" section since the IANA ranges were discussed extensively and the current number ranges are the result of a consensus I didn't want to have one person change without a lot of backup agreement. -- Wes Hardaker USC/ISI -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
