Hi,
My apologies for getting in some minor comments so late. I do not suggest any technical changes. However, at least to my eye, there are some little glitches and editorial changes I would suggest.
Among the glitches I see are incorrect internal cross references, old implementation key word boilerplate, no specification for assignment policy for one range of INFO-CODE values, misspelled words, etc. Editorial changes are somewhat of a matter of taste. In any case these are also marked in the attached.
Thanks,
Donald
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Donald
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Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell)
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On Thu, Mar 12, 2020 at 11:18 AM The IESG <iesg-secretary@xxxxxxxx> wrote:
The IESG has received a request from the Domain Name System Operations WG
(dnsop) to consider the following document: - 'Extended DNS Errors'
<draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error-14.txt> as Proposed Standard
The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits final
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Abstract
This document defines an extensible method to return additional
information about the cause of DNS errors. Though created primarily
to extend SERVFAIL to provide additional information about the cause
of DNS and DNSSEC failures, the Extended DNS Errors option defined in
this document allows all response types to contain extended error
information. Extended DNS Error information does not change the
processing of RCODEs.
The file can be obtained via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error/
IESG discussion can be tracked via
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-dnsop-extended-error/ballot/
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