Jouni, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa > On Jan 21, 2020, at 4:03 PM, Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-rfc2845bis-?? > Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen > Review Date: 2020-01-21 > IETF LC End Date: 2020-01-21 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > > This document was well written and easy read. I found no complaints. There are > bogus IDNits warnings for "non-RFC2606-compliant FQDNs". > > Major issues: > > None. > > Minor issues: > > None. > > Nits/editorial comments: > > 1) The sentence in lines 248-250 was hard to parse in the first few reads. I > suggest rewording... somehow. It was like this in RFC2845 already, though. > > 248 If hosts A.site.example and B.example.net share a key, > 249 possibilities for the key name include <id>.A.site.example, > 250 <id>.B.example.net, and <id>.A.site.example.B.example.net. > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@xxxxxxxx > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
