Hi Jouni, Thanks for the review. Responses below. > On 9 Mar 2020, at 7:19 am, Jouni Korhonen via Datatracker <noreply@xxxxxxxx> wrote: > > Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-nottingham-how-did-that-get-into-the-repo-?? > Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen > Review Date: 2020-03-08 > IETF LC End Date: 2020-03-12 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > This very needed document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC with > few minor nits. > > Major issues: > None. > > Minor issues: > 1) Line 116-117 states "This document uses ABNF [RFC5234], including by > reference the following rules: ALPHA, DIGIT." Why RFC5234 APLHA and DIGIT > rules need to be specifically called out? Good question; I suspect that's from an earlier revision. Removed. > Nits/editorial comments: > 1) Line 106 s/ike/like > 2) Line 106 Expand CSRF on the first use (and possibly give an informative > reference to it). Fixed in source, thanks! -- Mark Nottingham https://www.mnot.net/ -- last-call mailing list last-call@xxxxxxxx https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/last-call
