Re: [Last-Call] [Gen-art] [6lo] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-minimal-fragment-08

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Francesca, thanks for your review. Pascal, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Best,
Alissa


> On Feb 3, 2020, at 2:40 AM, Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini=40ericsson.com@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
> Looks good Pascal. Thanks for your quick update!
> 
> Francesca
> 
> On 31/01/2020, 10:55, "Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <pthubert@xxxxxxxxx> wrote:
> 
>    Hello Francesca:
> 
>    Many thanks for your review : )
> 
> 
>> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication. However, I noticed the
>> normative reference to an informative document, draft-ietf-lwig-6lowpan-
>> virtual-reassembly (ref. 'LWIG-VRB'), which is problematic, since this draft is
>> on the standard track.
> 
>    Moved both this and the reference to recoverable frags to informational. They are just illustrative anyway.
> 
>> 
>> Major issues: -
>> 
>> Minor issues: -
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> 
>> * Last paragraph of Section 5, I suggest a minor reformulation for clarity.
>> 
>> OLD:
>>   An associated
>>   caveat is that on a half duplex radio, if node A sends the next
>>   fragment at the same time as node B forwards the previous fragment to
>>   a node C down the path then node B will miss the next fragment.
>> NEW:
>>   An associated
>>   caveat is that on a half duplex radio, if node A sends the next
>>   fragment at the same time as node B forwards the previous fragment to
>>   a node C down the path then node B will miss the next fragment from node
>> A.
>> 
> 
>    Applied, and published 09. Please let me know if we are all set now? 
> 
> 
>    Again, many thanks, Francesca!
> 
>    Pascal
> 
> 
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